Hi and welcome to my blog. I'm in Totara 2 and my teacher is Miss Hines. We're a class of Year 7 and 8 students in Totara at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Wow James that snowman looks great and fit's right in seeing as it is going to be Christmas soon. It looked like you had a lot of fun and you have a lot of talent with this kind of thing. Maybe you should outline it in marker so that people can see you're amazing work better.
Hi James, my name is Joshua and I am from Panmure Bridge School. That snowman looks amazing you have put a lot of detail. It looked like you have so much fun drawing you must have a lot of talent. Next time you could make the snowman a little bit darker. Over all you have done a great job.Your sincerely Joshua
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.